Book review 2-1 The Lucky Whale

I read the book ‘The Lucky Whale’. I am going to tell you about this book’s story. One day Troy and Roy ran to their house and Roy said ‘There’s a whale on the beach’. His dad went outside and he saw the whale. They want to get the whale back into the water. But it was so big. It might be the whale die. Their mother thought we need some people to join us and help. Dad said their children ‘we need buckets and spades so go and get some buckets and spades. And come back to the beach’. They rant to get them and their mom went to get people to help. Dad went to the beach. When they arrive at the beach, the whale was very hot. If the whale dries out, it will die. They get some water on the whale. When they put the water, mom and lots of people came. They have to cool. Then the digger came to help. Jim put the water onto the whale. The whale flapped its tail. Jim dug a big trench and went from the whale to the water. The water kept the whale cool and Jim pull the whale into the water. The whale flopped its tail. They heard the whale said ‘Thank you for saving me’.
In fact there are kinds of news I sometimes heard. Whale is so big. If I watch the situation, what should I do? The story is good. I like it.(252 words)